Lightning Portrait

Pretty good for first time using a tablet. The drawing seems to be too blurry and there needs to be defining lines and color that adds depth and makes it overall realistic. The coloration of hair seems to be too light/bright for the drawing as the rest of the colors are dark. It would be better if her skin color was slightly lighter to match her bright hair, some lighter tones on her jacket/turtleneck? and the blending of some colors, such as that yellow on her jacket so it doesn't stand out that much and seem like it is just there.

Overall, good job <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Just needs improvement in shadows and adding depth. Can't wait to see other works